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Raven has kept this going for 70 weeks now - I'm impressed!
I didn't join until week 57 so I'm still a beginner.
Here is my contribution for this week, mixing all 15 words into one chapter.
The Slumber Party Mystery Chapter 17 - Diana's holding pattern
Ten Word Challenge: Florida, spit, child bride, operatic, busy, holding pattern, sunflowers, ginger jars, office, superintendentMini challenge: music to my ears, plot, powerful, braggart, super modelWhen Bumblebee had left the room, Diana lifted the lid of a big
ginger jar decorated with a pattern of
sunflowers, dropped the letter in it, and put the lid back on. Before Skittles had time to ask why, she turned back to him again and looked him straight in the eyes.
"Look here,
superintendent," she began.
"Lieutenant," said Skittles. His own rank, at least, he still felt pretty sure of.
"Sorry. I guess I read too many British crime novels. Look here,
lieutentant, I'm sure you're a very
busy man and must be wanting to get back to your
office, and I'm getting the impression you don't really understand a thing I'm saying. I assure you I had no intention of hurting my grandfather in any way, nor anybody else for that matter. I was only kind of trying out a
holding pattern, you might say, for the
plot in my book. By the way, the working title is "
Music to my ears" and it's set partly in England, partly in
Florida."
Standing there in her lime green dress, not only did she look like a goddess, but like a mysterious combination of innocent
child bride and
braggart super model all in one, thought Skittles. Humble and powerful at the same time, and somehow
operatic. You could never predict when she'd break out into another aria. He still wished he could get her to
spit out something a bit more informative, though.
"All I did," continued Diana, "was to put the sausages on the grill. I asked grandpa to keep an eye on them for me, and to watch Bumblebee's reaction when he came out with the drinks. The sausages weren't on the menu, you see. If things went really perfect, I was also hoping that they'd pop out of their skin at just the right moment. In my book, there are explosives involved, but of course I couldn't take my real life experiment that far. Analyze the remains if you will, you'll find nothing extraordinary about the sausages! But of course it was still stupid of me not to think of the fire hazard, on a day like this, and with grandpa not able to rise from his chair on his own. But he had his alarm, you know, and I didn't expect him to faint, and I was really expecting B to come out much sooner. And then when I got upstairs to my room, I saw from my window that Adam had arrived, too – that is, I saw his car parked in front of the house. But then he left again, I watched him drive off rather in a hurry. But then he came back. Has he given you any explanation for that yet?"